Tuesday, 9 April 2019
Adding details - Davlyn
The cat sits.
The cat sits on the grey deck in front of a wall.
The cat sits on the grey deck in front of a wall staring at the camera like a meerkat.
The cat sits on the grey deck in front of a wall staring at the camera like a meerkat also looking at the cars zoom past.
The dog plays.
The dog plays with a red bouncy ball in its mouth.
The dog plays with a red bouncy ball in its mouth while running around in the fresh green grass.
The dog plays with a red bouncy ball in its mouth while running around in the fresh green grass then he would go to sleep.
The bird eats.
The black and brown bird eats a worm.
The black and brown bird eats a worm then flies off.
The black and brown bird eats a worm then flies off so it can look for more pink dirty juicy worms.
The fish swims.
The fish swims in his tiny fish bowl making bubbles.
The little orange fish swims in his tiny fish bowl making bubbles the fish was waiting for his food.
The hedgehog eats.
The hedgehog eats a yummy tasty juicy watermelon.
The cute hedgehog eats a yummy tasty juicy watermelon the red and green watermelon is nearly the same size as the cute hedgehog.
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Great short poems and your use of words is great.
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