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Thursday, 19 March 2015

Verb Poem

I dance.
I dance with my brother sister and my cousin.
I dance to be better.
I dance because I want to be a good dancer.
I dance.

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13 comments:

  1. I like the way you said that you want to be a dancer I hope you became a dancer.

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  2. Nice job room 4 OMG i like the way you said i dance with my brother sister and cousin you are very cool i knew miss Tafea is a very good teacher

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  3. Hi room 4
    I like the way how you write a poem about I dance and you ended by saying I dance.
    Keep it up you one day you guys could end up a dancer.

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  4. I like the way you use capital letter and full stops.

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  5. Hi room 4 I like the way you put capital letters at the start of your sentences and I hope you become a good dancer.

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  6. Hi Room 4 I just wanted to say I really like the way you described who you dance with and why you dance, and maybe next time you could put in someone in your classroom who likes to dance!!

    But great job but the way.

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  7. Hi Room 4 I just wanted to say I really like the way you described who you dance with and why you dance, and maybe next time you could put in someone in your classroom who likes to dance!!

    But great job but the way.

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  8. Hi room 4 I like the way you put capital letters at the start of your sentences and I hope you become a good dancer.

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  9. WOW Room 4
    That is good that you like dancing. Dancing is really cool because there is different kinds of moves.
    MAKE SHORE YOU DANCE WITH PRIDE!!

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  10. So COOL Room 4 I like to say use's did a good job with your work and also you did a good job telling us who you like dancing with and why you like
    dancing and can you show me one day how to dance GOOD JOB ROOM 4 LOVE IT.

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  11. Hi Room 4

    wow room 4 I never knew you could dance I beat the really cool dance moves and can you please screenshot your self doing your dance moves that would be really cool and keep up the good work

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  12. Hi room 4
    I like the way you expressed your love for dancing I hope you can keep up the wonderful work!!
    :D

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  13. WOW ROOM 4,
    i just want to say that you have a very good poem about dancing.I really think that you guys were really cool moves up that stage to perform for Miss Kisrty.Keep that up because when your big you started to be famous

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